Let’s start this review with a basic rule for authors who are writing courtroom scenes. Trials don’t work like they are shown on Perry Mason. If you want to introduce evidence into trial, you have to share it with the other side and, if requested, the judge can rule whether or not it is pertinent to the case. The brothers Dani and Etyan Kollin broke this rule in their book The Unincorporated Man. The Kollins have created a wonderful world with an interesting twist, but they blow it in the execution. So, let’s see what’s up with the man who is not incorporated.

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